Here it is. It's ok. Needs a lot of work still. The first assignment for next term is to go in and add the lip-sync and facial expressions. We'll see how it goes.
Here is the feedback I got from my mentor for this term...
Areas of strength: You took direction well on both assignments, using the feedback from ecritique to improve your shot; this is great as taking direction is a big part of what we do. The acting in the dialoge shot, particularly at the beginning, was well done.
Areas of improvement: Moving forward, spend a little more time on your body mechanics, making sure the character has believable weight. While some of your acting choices are good, you struggle a bit with the body mechanics which in turn weakens your work.
Progression to the next term is: Recommend
I'm half way done with AM now. Here's hoping I learn and grow as much in the last three terms as I did in the first three. Thanks everyone for the support and feedback.
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I am so proud of you!! Can't wait to see what the next 3 terms bring.
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